Rachel
This makes me cry. Yet I am happy with the out come. Excellent job on this piece.

Diapers changed now, hair shiny and sleek
Nobody's child is finally learning to speak

How nice it is to see her learning to talk.

Nobody's child with skin like snow white
Crystal blue eyes now glisten so bright

My heart melts when I see her with you and the twinkle in her eyes when she looks at you :)

Softly I whisper "sweet baby I'll always be near"
Nobody's child now mine and she belongs here

I am so happy that ahe has found a home with you and in your heart:)

I am so proud of you.
Love Aunt Cindy

Wonderfully written....perfect rhyme and flow...with a sad but true message.....

So beautiful.....heartbreaking....but a happy ending for all.....Love and kisses to you both....so proud of you!!!!! Love, Mom

The ending had an excellent effect on me. well done. the wording was perfect and really brought out some true and heart propelling emotions.

5/5 David

WOW that was a marvelous poem as so was the first part, great job, wonderfully written ad a great choice of words, wish that would have happen to someone like me, great job, your friend Tracy dean5/5

Beautiful poem indeed, i am not sure but i guess i know the one you are talking about or may be i am confused. Well even if its not true, i could surely feel every word.

Keep writing
all the best and take care

Beautiful poems you penned here dear friend, so breathtaking written...it remind me a long time ago....Bert.

Adella is so beautiful she's lucky to have you. another nice write that is sad but true. hopefully the parents will grow up but i doubt it. 5/5 from me.

Omg Nobody's Child part 1 and 2 r so wow and i hav to say part 1 is ma fav out of all poems

Wow that is a really powerful poem with great emotions...
great job well written!!
xo

Wow that is a really powerful poem with great emotions...
great job well written!!
xo

Wow that is a really powerful poem with great emotions...
great job well written!!
xo