Oh wow...
the repitition of "I am me" makes this poem so powerful and i love the way in which you contrast things like "sunshine" to "moonbeam and darkness" showing the full variety of who you are.
the last 5 lines are so effective to, as its a dramatic change and the atmopshere goes from feeling free to the reality of enclosure..the last four words again are hard hitting as they are separate
5/5!

You are begininng to understand that things dont have to make sense to be beautiful.
You are using your soul.
you are a poet.
You are beautiful.
maria, maria, maria.
The girl with the beautiful soul.

This is good short and contradicting (in a good way) i like it it is kinda myterious which is awesome lol thx for the comment

keenan

I really like this even if you don't know what it means.

Very unique poem... I like the ending, your repetition of words:-I am me- first leaves bad impression on me, but than I read it once again I can say that you created powerful atmosphere.
I am maria,-I don't like this line it isn't effective like the rest of this piece.
Anyway great poem, with very original wording and excellent rhythm! It deserves 5/5

Lol, so cute!