Comments : Thinking of you all the time..

  • 16 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was such a sweet poem!
    Nicely written
    Only i think you should put it in stanzas,otherwise it was very good !

    "You hold my heart in the palm of your hand
    And I pray that you understand
    That holding someone's heart is not a game

    ^i really liked those lines =)
    And the ending
    Well Done
    Keep Up the good work =D

    Keep Smiling xx

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Its nicely written. Great job.Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    Awww, so cute!

    ^.^