by Bonnie Rose
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I like the way you ask the reader "Do you think he likes me, too? " its very original rather than using "i". good job! |
by Rose Noble
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Thanks. =3 This was truely from my heart. It's happening IRL, so it came naturally. |
by Connie
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I enjoyed this poem ~ really brought back memories from when I was young. I really like your second stanza! |
by Rose Noble
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Thank you. =3 |