Comments : Dearest Heart: Part 7

  • 16 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Awesome and so true. So many people go through this. And I know that eventually I will too. But you are part of my mind and you will help me get through it.

  • 16 years ago

    by handsome

    Nice work...this is in keeping with my promise on the puzzle...angels always keep their promises, keep writing, i love your imagination

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Man, I'm rooting for the Heart in this arguement! Anyway, another fantastic write m'dear. I Love You and all your work! =]]
    Amazing babe!

    <333

    Love Love Love<3
    *H.B.o.O*

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    This "Dear Heart" poems of yours is like the birth of a new creativity.. Amazing! When I read all the poems, it's like, really knowing what both sides are going through... The description on what the mind and heart is going through is so realistic that I really don't know who to take side... If you keep writing, I'll always be reading these poems and waiting for the next.. Take care.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Smashing, m'dear!

    The Mind's squabble took my breath away. It seemed to me to be delirious with rage and aversion towards the Heart, whereas its case certainly was based on sound reason. If I was out of breath, how much more will the heart react? I need a pacemaker, by then. Ha.

    Can't wait to read the next part! x]