Beautiful poem
perfect from start to the end
touching
deep
full of emotions

voted u 5/5

love
amy
ps-check out my poem murder or suicide, vote & comment ... i'll return the favour

I love this poem it expresses a lot of emotion its wonderful how did you get so good

Love-krista-

Awesome. I loved the rhyme in it. And thanks for commenting mine. <3

Well, it chilled me to the bone while I was reading it.
Feelings very well brought outside.

The end of it was great:

"The River embraces me,
Sweet release is mine
I wait for the silence to still my heart
In the arms of the River, I fall apart"

Well, it chilled me to the bone while I was reading it.
Feelings very well brought outside.

The end of it was great:

"The River embraces me,
Sweet release is mine
I wait for the silence to still my heart
In the arms of the River, I fall apart"