"Nothing has shown such beauty,
we have never been so close,
our passion rages,
as the pace picks up,
our mood brightens,
as we flow,
we are the lyrics,
we are the soft, sweet sounds of music."

I like this one, its so sweet....just shows that you make everything beautiful

The whole poem was like 'whoa!' i especially liked this bit:

"We are the music that changes the mood,
we are the music that casts a spell,
we are the music that controls the world,
we are the music that enchants and astounds,
we are the music that shines in the night,
we are the music."

this poem certainly changed the mood of my day! lolz. 5/5 keep writing

~NinjaGirl~

This poem was one of the best poems i have ever read! I absolutely loved it! i cant wait to read more from you!!
~Love and Trust~

Woah woah ... never knew you could write such beauty without any pain ... u should write more of these types coz they ur breath away more than ur sad ones ... they make you take a step back and say that something so trivial (like dancing) can actually be an act of intense beauty ...