It was a beautiful poem. your use of imagery and repetition made a nice effect. loved it. 5/5

I like the general idea - waiting by the waters edge for stars to come out is so romantic :) i also love the way you descibe the stars. great writing!

Beautiful

Amazing and beautiful

This was indeed very romantic...,makes me want to go and sit by the waters edge

F-in sweet lol

5/5 XD