Comments : Freeze

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Very endearing. I liked the little twist at the end, 'twas simply lovely.
    All the best and take care. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Staring at our picture
    Frozen in its frame"

    i love the imagery you used through this poem, everything relating back to the aspect of "freezing"...you did a great job without being too metaphorical...6/5!