Comments : Drowning in despair.

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh no, I hope you don't feel that way...because home is well its home. I loved this poem though! It's so flowing, and so rhythmic. At the end, the last two rhymes threw me off because I don't pronounce "aunt" like you do. But once I read "want" it made sense. But overall this poem is BRILLIANT!