Hey nicce not ur best but nicce

Another great poem by you dear, i really like this one, as always you have done a wonderful job.

Wonderful.
I like the style u have used. Good work.
5/5
.x

Very dark and deep
the double d's
great job
laura

Yeah, it was good, i dont know what you'd class your best, but i didnt enjoy it as much as "Another rape story".
You do have talent and your work is unique, well done
xxxxx

It is very interesting. You're poems are totally unique and strange(in good way). I like it, but first stanza didn't impressed me at all. Others are great, 5/5.