Comments : The Darkest Nights

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    This. SHould be made into a song!

    The chorus repeat was excellent. It flowed beautifully.

    The interpretation information left in the poem was sufficient and plenty. Well done.
    The title blends the poems meaning beautifully in those three words. "The Darkest Nights". Again, well done.

    Reverberation is an advanced word. Matches the sentence in that paragraph excellently.

    (Although not many people will know that means the persistance of a sound. You need to put a definition for the rest. We have ALOT of beginers in P&Q. Many will not know what it means.)

    Great Poem. No. Excellent poem.

    I shall be expecting to hear more of your poems. And my WORD. You shall hear from me again.

    I shall forever and always be,
    [Deathly'Amore]

  • 16 years ago

    by BloodyEndings

    Absolutely brilliant!

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really like this piece it's almost like it should be a song with the way the 1 stanza is repeated over and over again. Fantastic work, great flow and imagery, the use of vocab in the poem was also wonderful. keep up the great work 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I absolutely lovedddd the repeated stanza. The first stanza, though.. well, it seemed to have words that were too big, eh. But, oh well. It was still amazing; along with the rest of the poem.

    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The mystery in this were so fabulous and great..It was so dark and sad..I liked the wording and the topic
    My fave lines should be;

    The images of carmine blood, spreading across the tile
    Haunt me until no end, my soul weeping all the while
    The bullet that ripped though the air was meant for me
    I wished that you had stepped back, and just let it be

    Well done
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Alright!
    Now THIS is poetry.
    Kudos.

    Now.
    First complaint: I'd say use punctuation. It'll really help the flow and get the point across better.

    Otherwise.
    Nicely done.

    Your wording was very nice on this, and maybe a cliche topic, but I didn't <read> it as cliche. Which is excellent. I'm really picky.

    I also liked how you kept repeating that one line... "On the darkest nights". It <really> made the poem.

    Nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great poem by you, as always your poems never disappoint me with its value. you are such a great writer and i think i have told you that before.
    i really loved the emotion and the word choice in this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was excellent. The flow was just perfect and the poem as a whole had a great mixture of emotions. Great wording, too. Keep up the good poetry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cody r

    Cool

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    Great job once again your vocab was great and so was the flow and it really should be a song. just amazing keep it up!