I liked This Poem && The way u repeated the lines... Made it seem u was Eager to get ur point across!! Very Nice =] xx

This was a great poem. I really felt the emotion and keep up the great writing! You're a natural. very sad emotions and i started shaking as if this was my goodbye to the guy i love ... he is with someone else now .. its painful to see, even when they show it off in my face ... it hurts more than pain does ..

5/5

Awww god I feel like I'm about to cry... So much emotion... I loved it! Great job!