WOW great poem ,I liked the way it told the message, very well done, if only everyone would stop and look at whats on the inside instead just seeing the outside maybe , love wouldn't be so bad, great poem, well written and vocabulary was excellent, great job, 5/5, your friend Tracy d
p.s most people that read this will never get the message , but I did thanks for sharing.

I like this one... well penned ,deep, great poem...keep up the great work...5/5(for sure)
your friend ...*Melody*:)