Very powerful. i really like the repitition of "imagine"

This is an amazing poem.
Keep up the good work.
5/5 all the way. :)

Jadee.:)

Imagine all the pain slipping away from the voids in our hearts, while im holding you close and protecting you from the dark.

wow love that first part...hey you should try to split your poem up into stanzas. it will make the flow of the poem better and make it sound alot better. it will also make more ppl read it... great job over all 5/5

always
Manda

Great Poem! Lots of imagination :) Simply Awesome!

Aw, this is a really cute poem:)
I liked it a lot.

5/5