It was really descriptive I really liked it. You put the girl as your meaning for life or your reason to live. Death seems to be the only answer.
beautiful poem! 5/5

OMG yet another deep romantic...Beautiful it's so heart warming...In an odd way... :) ...Um it actually feels like I'm there...Feeling the coldness of everything that used to be...Brava.
~*Heaven Leigh*~

I REALLY like it! i too felt as though i was there.

~A
p.s thanks for your comment

Wowwys!!!
great poem!!
darkness will someday overcome us all