Awesome poem! Nice rhyming. It's really heartfelt

Oh.. =( I'm sorry for your mother. Keep strong =]
The poem is wonderful though. Full of emotions and pain... about it. And it just reads nicely.
5/5 deffinately.
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Aww! im sorry sweetie...that must be hard to deal with (ill pray for you and your family hunn) really good job on the poem though it really was heart felt <33

So much emotion in this piece...I had at least 4 family members of mine pass away from cancer...tell your mother to keep strong and Ill keep you and her in my prayers=]

Brooke<3

Thats a really great poem. its really touching.