An enjoyable read about how love can change us from our happy o lucky selves into a shell.

Everyone called her rough
from laughter she never got enough
she never cried nor did she frown
she was never depressed or even down
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A lovely opening about a happy go lucky girl without a care in the world. I think 'rough' may be better as tough though.

when she entered a room she painted a smile one evryones face
she always said that "life is nothing but a race"
"you have to run as fast as you can"
"you have to live the moment and never make a plan"
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There's always one person that can light up a whole room until something changes.
Typo- one should be on and evryones should be everyone's.

she used to wipe her freinds tears away
to make them smile she always had a way
but as soon as she fell in love
her happy nights became sad and rough
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I like this part because I can relate alot to it being that one person who is always helping others stay happy but getting nothing in return.

she thought that no man could ever make her cry
but he didnt only do that, he made her wish to die
she soon became a body without a soul
after we used to think she is got it all
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Last line is should be had. Love isn't always simple.

she cried hersel to sleep everyday
when he left her and simply walked away
she stood infront of the mirror for hours asking herself why?
what have i done to make him say good bye?
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Very powerful stanza which we can all relate too, I think.
Hersel needs an f on the end.

she was lonely when she actually wasn't
she soon hated everything thats pleasant
i looked at her
and now i was sure

no one is strong infront of love
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A very sad ending, love can be so difficult at times.

All the best , Em