Comments : Alone

  • 16 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    Very powerful...it was magnificent
    Brit

  • 16 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Very nicely written. A poem that grabs the reader and says "do something".

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sometimes when another human hurts us so bad we tend to forget about those friends who still love us and want to be there for us....through this hard time, never forget about those who do care for you.....and if I ever hear you say you have no one...guess again.....I may be 16 but I have a heart for the hurting

    Lovely poem my friend...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Very sad and gut wrenching piece. The pain screams from the words you have penned.

    No more tears do I have
    for they are all gone
    you took them all away
    when I was left alone.

    This last stanza speaks volumes.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Aww, that's so sad.