This is really good i like it a lot. it has a lot of meaning to it 5/5

Hey babe,
I liked how there was no fixed rhyme scheme, kinda emphasised the meaning and topic behind the poem, confusion and regret.
nice one
take care
Geo
xxooxox

It was short but to the point..And there always a time a girl askes to herself this that you questioned

Everything you told me was lies.
I don't know why I even liked you,

You reflected that so well..I liked your explanations
Keep it up,
Laura

I can really relate to this poem =)
it short and sweet yet gets your point across well!

well done!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Oh.
Dear.

Kill me with your cliche.
This doesn't have flow to it,
It doesn't have structure to it,
It barely has any meaning or point.
I'm not sure what to say.
I sound like an a-s-s, but the truth hurts. >.< Really sorry.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

Very short and very sad. and true feelings. i can understand your pain behind the poem.
your writing style is great and nice.

in very short words you have expalained alot of things. and my dear, that is called talent.

thats why ia m giving you 5/5

take care

Yeah I can really relate to this poem. 5/5.

I can't believe I trusted you,
When you told me you loved me,
You said it was true,
You told me you would never leave me

in this little stanza, i think it should say "You said it was "all" true". I think if you added in the "all" it would balance it out a little bit. good job. =]

That was really nicely done n felt ur emotions...
Good Job
5/5

God bless u

Your poems leaving me wanting to know more.. wanting to know more about what happened and what all went wrong. your writing is really something.
5/5
.x

Again, this has alot of emotion put into it, its kind of a sad poem to, i mean guys are just thinking "whos next" and girls are always thinking how long, 5/5 again, great work

Kristina,
Some lines seemed awkward and I think that the topic that you chose was also fairly common, but that`s OK. How you described it was what counts. I think that if you made this poem just a little longer, you could have even more in it that made this poem stand out. Don`t get me wrong, this poem had a lot of emotion in it though. I don`t really have much else to say, but keep it up, and 4 out of 5

With all due respect,
Hatori
>Wish upon a dream>

The flow is much improved from the last peice I read.
I liked it. I saw the point. And I like your structure.
Sometime's truth does hurt. But one person's opinion isn't always the truth.
Keep writting.
Your poems are very enjoyable.
Elaine.

A beautiful and mournful poem. I loed the words and the message is clear. Very heartfelt piece. 5/5 all the way

Tc

Ok, well something i have noticed in your poems is that the endings arent very good
but the whole content of the poem
is great
and then comes the ending and
makes the poem down a level

so a

4/5