Morbid beauty, the title itself captivated my attention.and what follows is exquiste piece of writing full of emotions, written with perfection.Brillaint write,enjoyed it.

Weakness overcomes the soul within me,
I don't want to know what the future holds,
My eyes are blind, I beg you not to see,
I won't let go, until my corpse grows old

from where such imagination came?? this is just so outstanding....this is so unique so brilliant.....i really missed great poems like this....keep writing

all the best and take care

Sam
Excellent write once again. Very intense emotions in this piece. Imagery excellent.

While I live, I watch my innocent mistakes,
I watch the music and the love,
I watch the morbid beauty overcome my wake,
You were once my beloved.

How sad.
Love Cindy

This is one of the most wonderful poems i have ever read,and believe i have read a lot!
5/5

The title atract my attention but the interior of the poem is amazing.I like this one the most because I know what your feelings were when you wrote it..So,don't stop writing cause you're a great poet.Best regards,MihaXxX

I was really pulled in by the title as so many others were. The piece was extremely unique and the concepts flow was as pulling as the title. I truely enjoy your work.

Like others, I was drawn in by the title and now am a little lost for words. A painful yet cleansing write. Wonderful job!