Comments : Crush

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    You write so beutifully. This piece is so sad and heart felt.

    Night slumber brings the nightmares
    of a wound that cannot heal
    The shattered glass of heartache
    sinking in the hurt she feels.

    This stanza captures the pain of heartache so well.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy