So sweet and touching it was..It was such an enjoyable read..ı liked how you repeated

I could grab my wings and fly away,
Wake myself up to a brand new day,

And it was eliminated in my opinion
Keep it up,
Laura

Awwww, this is such a great poem.
you have put too many feelings into this poem, you are really talented.
keep it up.
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.