Awwww. thats so sweet and sad at the same time. i really like it. 5/5 deffanitely!

xo kisses xo

Yeah that was really sweet. I really like the topic - haven't read something on that topic before. :)

I like the way you tie up your poems in the end - definitely makes it all wrap up nicely.

Mo xx

Now this was great, I really liked the story you told, the word choice again was amzing, the flow was perfect, the imagery was vivid, the only mistake I found was A knew world to her son was shown;
knew should be new. Other than that again you have another perfect poem here. keep up the good work 5/5 although I wish i could give you more

I frikken love that ending, beautiful, simply beautiful.
I liked how you ended this poem on such a sweet positive note, I found it very touching.
I enjoyed the word choice and rhyme scheme in this, and the imagery was once again well painted.