I really like how you switched them around.

I liked this Alot!!!!!!
godd work
~hazel~

Rissa i love this poem too!
stop writing so many good poems, it makes me feel pathetic cause none of mine are even good enough to bother posting.
this poem reminded me of some one so much it made me cry

This is an amazing, heart-warming, poem. I love it. What was your inspiration?

Great job, ha i knew you wished for me lol jkjk i know its not about me but that explains why you never see shooting stars with him lol