I liked it. Smiles can brighten anyone's day. I loved the word choice in this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Aww that's so sweet, and so true. i loved it, so simple and so elegant. beautiful, you always have good writes.

This indeed was a delightful read. I liked the smile concept you used in this poem. How beautiful an act of love it is! :D

It is a gift which one should treasure.

Lovely work, as always! Thank you for sharing.
all the best and take care,
Debbie

This is a wonderful poem. A smile can light up anyones day. I love your poem

This poem is awesome.. one of my favorites :D

I was a sweet poem and it felt good to read it. Because its very true. A smile can do a lot. 5/5

That was sweet.

Aww, this was incredibly sweet. I agreed with everything you said, too; a smile can do anything really, such a simple thing, making something so very different (for the better).

"Was the reason I fall for you" - 'fall' should be 'fell'. :)

Thats so true! A simple smile
Can mean a lot.
It can be a reason
For the purest love to start

That's right! 1 little smile can change everything! Nice writing 5/5

That simple smile is
What I adore about you
That is the reason
I wish to be around you

I love this poem very much. But that part made me stop and think. A person dosent wish to be around some one if there never happy or smiling. Smiles and bring a shine to anyones day

A simple smile can make ur heart travel thousnands of miles to reach the shore,,,a simple smile will take over ur sleep and opens a fairy world..with a smile one may life happily for eternal and with a simple smile it may ruin ones life for ever...
great job.......
smiles has great power a nd u have certinly portrayed that in this poem beautifullly.

Oh i think its was a simple words to to all of us... it was so sweet words goran nothing else i can defind my emotion thru this poet. the way u keep repeating the word UR SMILE im so smiling too and i was remembring my special someone so i can relate ur poem at the same time. wonderful work 5/5

Yep a smile can do alot! dast xosh

Awww this poem was so beautiful
I wish a lot of people could realize the simplest things like a beautiful smile
Your truly gifted
plz dont ever forget it
5/5
love always
kaila

Really loved it simple but brilliant! makes me smile just reading it can't say much more your an excellent writer so keep up the good work 5/5 great job!

Lol cute poem but instead of saying fall for you say fell for you. 5/5

I Like This Poem..So Sweet..So Simple...Reminds Me Of My Best Friend ;D...5/5