Comments : Summer in the Silent Air

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Awwww, Such a sad write. Memories of the love gone by. Sometimes we just can't escape what might have been. I loved the referance of bittersweet, how many times have memories haunted me about some place I have been but yet I wouldn't give anything for the memories no matter the lies and hurt I would feel from that moment. Ahhhhh, Touching, beautiful, saddening, yet inspiring. Loved it.
    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by ctmskm

    Very Nice. I loved the emotions and flow of this poem. your writing style is usualy mellow and unique. keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow i loved this. its described so well and has such a nice flow to it.
    5/5 nice job!