Comments : Crazy Dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by adelinaxx

    I love your use of words. really captures it

  • 17 years ago


    I loved this. It made me smile. I can't believe more people haven't read and commented on this, I found it very good. I always like to find one specific stanza in a poem that I like, and with this one I kept highlighting each that I read, lol.

    "Seeping through your pores,
    Slumbering in sweat,
    Passion rages in your dreams,
    Here heaven can be met."

    ^^ That one is the one that stuck out to me the most, though. It has strong imagery and your word choice is impeccable. Great job.