Wow this is really good. it gave me the chills

I agree with the other comments. It's a wonderful poem with a lot of meaning. Great job. I loved it. =]

Wow what an amazing poem i really felt for this one this stanza just blew me away:

He holds her by her shame
and claims her with his mouth
curses her with his words
and leaves her full of doubt

great poem 5/5

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I absoultely LOVE this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really amazing. It sounds sooooooo much like ME! LOL. Well keep up the good work!
~Neely~

Good

Excellant write, raw and real, hard hitting, this is so good,

Don