I can relate, I too had an abusive dad
Good job! :)

This is one of my favorites..and I'm sure it's hard to write about such a hard/sad subject. You're an amazing write, and you have an amazing style. You're just amazing..=)

This one is so sad I just can't imagine all the pain that you wrote here. I hope that you are o.k. now.
You wrote this piece with such honesty, and every line is filled with pain and sadness.

No words to begin with.....
it can be touching for one and disturbing for the other ....however its just inexplicable to put it in words

we are actually helpless sometimes Tracy....

TAKE CARE
LOVE
Superna

Wow, First I read the wrong one. Now reading this one I really know more about what did happen. Makes me feel guilty that no one could help you. Also makes me think a lot about how the world is trying to lessen the amount of child abuse. Its a fight we might never win but the world is trying. Its awful that there are people in this world capable to such evil and pain. I don't know why we have such people in this world. I don't think they are punishing them good enough either. Put them in jail they just come out even more pissed than before. My mom was attacked and stabbed 28 times and lived and the idiot will be getting out of jail soon =/ He didn't get life in jail because she lived and it was a miracle that she lived. I Thank god she is with me today. Excellent poem, Very detailed and filled with emotion. 5/5

Holy crap! (*swallows*) I can't believe this! I mean, that is even more horrible than I could ever imagine. I am SO sorry. I can't even fathom living in a household such as that! Not that it's any consolation but you really take the reader in with this. It's hard not to cry. (*sighs*) Seriously I don't know how anyone gets through that.
Another one I'd like you to read is Shattered Glass/Shattered Lives. I think you can relate. Hope you enjoy. And keep it up!
~Midnight Sun
p.s. I'm sorry but I can not rate this poem. I can't make myself rate the rage your father felt and how you express that personally. But just know that was EXTREMELY touching.

This poem seems so real and so emotional. It seems your true feelings have poured from the ink. It's sad...I feel so sorry for you or anyone else who went through such trauma. I think the emotional pieces that are heartfelt are the best writes. I think you poured your heart out on this write.....it can be felt by the reader very easily. No one will walk away with a mushy heart...this is so heart wrenching!! NICE WRITE MY FRIEND!!!!

Wow it's rlly sad i sis wed tell me story like
we had two diffed dad ang i cord olny see her on the weeked but my mom did not lesen

OMG!!! i was in the same position as you were!! getting beat all day with nothing to do....but now things are better....your really brave on writting this down and letting people read it.....really brave :)

This poem is awesome!! Also very sad to know that parents abuse their children and that the child can't do anything about it. Keep up the great writing!

Hats off for writing this nd sharing with us