I luv the way the poem flows, it pulls u in. the best part is how u put accidental on its own, its just gives it this cold kinda feeling. gr8 work!

I have to agree with everyone else, this is a really good poem; i enjoyed reading it... kind of feel bad for the little kids scared of the doctor... did you use to be/are you still? but this was a wonderful poem; B-E-A-UUUUUTIFULLY done

-love whitney-

Your poems cute..:) i liked the message..