Great Job on this one! I loved your form and the way you worded the poem! The reader can feel the mixed emotions pouring out!
Love always
KT (Love and Trust)

This is nicely written poem. i really like the real emotion in it and also the world choice was so great. keep it up dear.

...I love the words. It flows smoothly and well I was really captivated by the words. Nice write. I like the imagery as well especially the first lines. That first line kinda sets the mood for the rest of this piece. It progresses nicely and then the emotions come out as well. Cool and dark or is it dark and cool?
~Faith-less

This was so impressive writing..Th explanations and images were breathetaking and I liked the flow
My fave lines should be;

The empty sky will drown the moon
The stars will fall on top of us

Keep it up,
Laura