OMG....i|LOVE|iT

This is a GREAT poem...keep it up..i love it 5/5

Something seems more pure
Less tainted by life

I wish i still had that! Its so true. And Njoy it while it lasts. Youll miss it.

This is a great poem. I believe you could make it into a song lol. Great job . 5/5
-vino

"Yes we may be teens
Young though we are
Something seems more pure
Less tainted by life
Doesn't matter what you think
It's just what we believe
Even if it's not forever
Still we'll call it love"

It annoys me how some of the older people look down at the youth as being too shallow to comprehend such a complex principle called Love. In which case, this was a beautiful piece. It was written quite well and progressed finely on the whole. Nice work. =]