Comments : Something There All Along

  • 12 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I think this poem is fantastic, the word choice and vocab were brillant to say the least, the emtion was clear and strong. the flow was flawless, and the message was clear. I can't think of a way to improve perfection, this was very deep indeed. You have done an exceelent job, keep up the good work. 5/5