by Jackie Marie Jun 14, 2007
category :
Special events /
fathers day
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*It's not that great. I wrote it more out of anger than anything.* |
by bacha
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Gooooooood very good:):)) |
by hani
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Hi |
by Jessica
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Aww this was sad,, i liked it ,, 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
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I understand your anger and your hate for him...And you reflected those so well on this |
by Wallace
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Very good poem, very interesting. I could feel the emotions in that poem and i thought that was very good. Although i saw where a change could be made, and it was in this verse. |