A little forced rhyming... But only one that I saw.
I liked this a lot too, honestly.
I'm in awe of your style. It's beautiful.
[[Haha, I left you an incredibly long comment on the last one, so sorry, but this one's rather short! Haha.]]

Awesome poem keep writing ur amazing i love ur poems

Nice work. The words spoke strongly and even though the format meant that the flow wasn't that smooth, the poem still worked because of the way you wrote it. The fact that the flow was like that actually provided a better emotional read. Thanks

cheers, josh

Great poem....

I like it a lot!

K~