Comments : Society

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Print the ideal on paper to read
    Watch them deteriorate following simple words
    Nesecity for perfection disables us all"

    If I may say so myself, society is messed up beyond repair. Your thoughts in this poem are spot on and really smart. Im glad you can see this and not be oblivious and blind to it all. The cruelty of society is sickening, really what do we gain from it? Great poem!

    Take Care