Wonderfully written poem ,great flow wording was great, this is a very sad poem, be I loved it. amazing the way your mind thinks so much like mine, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean
5/5 p. s drop in and check out a few of my poems sometimes

I love it...it is just like what I am going through..so...jus so u no...ur not alone..lol..

I loved reading this ,as i can relate to it ,brilliantly wrote ,well done.

Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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Amazzing poem girly, you put so much emotion and meaning behind it a deffinite 5/5 <33

I really like your poems that i've read so far

Wonderfully written! This is one of those poems that I believe everyone can relate to at least once in their life times. Excellent

I lovee this poem. How it some how triggers a strong emotion in the people who read . Now that's a poem =]]

I love this piece..very well written. It fits into my life to a tee.
Keep up the good work.

That was really beautiful. Very relatable. 5/5

I really like the emotion in this poem and I like the structure of rhyming couplets. Great write :)

Wow! I love this piece....and kinda feeling your words today
Good job!!!!