Comments : Aftermath

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    This is good. i can relate to this stanza

    I don't know what's going on
    I haven't talked to you in a while
    Thinking of you
    Always makes me smile

    xoxo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "I don't know what's going on
    I haven't talked to you in a while
    Thinking of you
    Always makes me smile"

    This was a really sweet and beautiful poem :)
    Great poem.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by NoReasonToLive

    This is really good.. this is how i feel bout one of my xs... but i know me and him wont ever work out our differences he has a gf now..

    5/5
    [*]Breann[*]

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow, your writing is great! i enjoyed your poem very much, it is awesome.

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Yeah that was good, and the ending was abit random but i felt it, i think it was a good way to end the poem....but yeah, I know what you mean, if that poem is true....

    peace

  • 16 years ago

    by jackie

    Preety

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! Sounds amazing and definitely sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    THIS IS A REALLY SAD POEM ITS GOOD HOW YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF...GOOD WRITE.