Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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Nicely writtened.... I like the last part,

"You know whats happening...
You're dying of a broken heart."

Well Done!

Awesome poem I loved it. Keep up the great work. And thanx so much for the coment. Shanik

Your poems are great. Thanks for your comments. Love it x

Nicely done. i loved it. great poem. you're great. thanks for the comment by the way =]
take care

That's a nice poem xD keep up the good work.