Stop trying to break me down,
That's all you were ever good for.

i loved these alines. maybe it realy relates to me great work i will must give you 5/5

Hey this poem is awesome.it shows a reealy deep sense of emotion.and definetly strongly worded wit a little ryhming. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

Ouch, this had a lot of emotion in it for the guy its directed at, i like the ending, strong and purposeful.

5/5 David

Well...i really liked it. the ending is kool 2 me...but hey, who am i 2 say. its ur poem

I think it ended just as it was supposed to! good work.

Well the poem was good.
written it well.
well what can i say about this poem
hmm..........................
but then again the flow was good and the imagery was perfect.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Awsome I loved it

Great Poem I Love it.
Such strong words
from deep down in Your Soul & Your Heart

I LOVE IT

5/5

I think u was releaseing a lot of anger but i liked it u didnt make all nasty and to detailed ur good

GREAT POEM I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

Wow great job! i felt exactly like this after my first heartbreak and we always ended up getting back together. thanks for putting it in a poem. DeAnna

Oh yeah and read No More that i wrote...its kinda the same idk. it was kind of a liberating poem for me