Beautiful piece. There was a tinge of mysteriousness that I've noted on these lines:

"...They died together but the fire inside them never did...they said goodbye, but held tight as they slowly deceased from this world...they took with them the fire inside them, that I long for each day."

These lines reminded me about the Parabola, wherein the Prince and Princess died together, but their passion for each other lingers...

Lovely work.

"They couldn't be together so ended it all"
It's like Romeo and Juliet, isn't it...? ^^
Sad love poem... ^^
Great poem..

I love this poem (n_n)
Check out my other love poems..
I have this way of turning otherwise sweet, sentimental poems into depressing, sad ones..
haha..

My girl thought my poem
"Here in your arms (i wish it were this way)"
was a farewell to her..
It wasn't of course (n_n)
I'd never want that to happen

5/5 (n_n)