Comments : If only I knew...

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, that's an amazing poem! I love it and can relate to it.

  • 16 years ago

    by ragrag

    I love it. It's just awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Neo
    What a wonderful dedication to your friend. You have such a kind caring heart. Your words you have penned show this.

    If only I knew,
    That you were tired of walking in the path of life,
    I would have carried you,
    In my shoulders and taken you through.

    I know you would have carried your friend. May God lighten your heart and keep your friend safely in his hands. Take care Neo.
    Love you Mom Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem very sad , and nicely written....you are a great friend...thats obvious...definitely 5/5. keep up the good work=) ...*Melody*=)