I lioke it...keep writting...i'll put a new one t his weekend...

Wwwwooooooowwwwwww beautifulllllllllllll

Yeah everyone hates a broken heart, but one day a guy will pick it up and put it together for you. Great job. 5/5
-vino

A poem that i for one can relate to. Keep up the great work 5/5

I loved it girlo:):):)

it was very touching one :):):)
but Don’t be sad girl they don’t deserve you don’t ever show them that you are really broken be a strong young lady coz I swear that in some day you will found the one who appreciate you more and understands you for sure .:)

khuloodan:):)
smile all the time:)

Great write very understandable feeling could be felt in your words wishfulsinful told me you had some really good stuff i will continue to read
-laura-
come check some of my stuff out if you want