Comments : Lyze

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Yup this 1 was great 2 ! great imagry !!!i cud c it in my head

  • 16 years ago

    by lovely

    Wow! at the end, did you mean "there"?