You did a fantastic job with this title, very awesome! Really smooth flow, too. And I absolutely love the attitude!

Oh, this is so damn powerful.... you took the title and created a masterpiece. It's a shame what money and power can do to people, they forget about the more important aspects of life. When will people realize that money can not buy everything. Love this write Nat, well done.

Very odd, but well written. the word usage is unique. the rhymes didn't seem forced either. nice poem.