Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

Chan
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Wow. amazing poem love :)
although, you don't need to die, there are other ways to punish people of their sort.
i hope things get better, and i hope that your "best" will be good enough.
5/5 mate.

Oh my goodness this poem is deep and wonderful. Great poem 5/5

Hum always a bit uneasy about suicide poems... hope it's fictional that u will never ever think that the difficulties ur facing are worth ending it cuz it's not like that.
life gets better.
one day or another...

haha here u go a lil rime... hehe anyways apart from the discomfort 5/5 hands down. really good poem showed a lot of pain, sadness, n hurt.

Your such a powerful writer i love this poem because i know exactly how you feel and what your going through because with your poems i can visualize what's going on and not many people can do that through their writing i love it

That was great

Perfect balance , rhytmically faultless ..
its not often that a sad/hurt poem is written this way . for me thats what makes it very special ... its poetry within poetry ( i think )
i mean wow .. there a very raw emotion and obvious anger yet it flows so smoothly ..
superb job !!

paul x

Hey this is a nice poem, i love it!! keep up the good work

Awww...I love it...It's beautiful..
Very well written...
5/5..
^_^

This is amazing, i love it

Best poem i have read. Keep it up