Wow that is strong.. is that a personal one or is it just words you put together..

This poem was very good. It made a point and it's sadly focused on a major issue. A lot of people think cutting is the answer and I agree with you that its not. I really liked this poem. 5/5

I thought this was a very good and strong poem, the emotions were great and the last to lines were magnifique. The rhyming was good and never really seemed forced at all and the flow was right on, a well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Nice job take it from someone who knows you helped someone by writing this including myself nice work

This was a deep poem where you searched for the emotions and thoughts that cutters have. The piece was strong and spoke to me. You chose good words that greated a good rythm and good flow for this type of poem. Excellent job! 5/5