Wonderful rememberance for a wonderful man for Father's Day.....

I know now why you did not tell me about this one. I just found it and the tears have not stopped. I know your Dad would be so proud of you. You have grown into a fine man and Father. I wish he could have been with us much longer. To enjoy his three beautiful grand-children. I know he watches from Heaven above and smiles down on you son. Thank you for honoring your father with this beautiful and moving poem. Thank you for being a wonderful son. My heart and soul remain empty since death knocked on our door :( I will always love you.

If life could be as kind as it demands from us.

Beautiful dedication indeed.

He must be proud of you.

all the best and take care

This is sooo sad. An excellent dedication to your wonderful father. He would be very proud of you. Your word choice and flow in this piece are excellent! Raw emotion straight from the heart. 100/5!

Wow that poem touched my heart. well done

WOW!!
THIS IS GOOD

Very touching and so sad.
Beautiful written.
I'm sure he's proud of you.
Take care

That is so sad oh my god u had me bout ta start crying that was vicious 4 real