5/5 really good poem
-Elizabeth

I love how you paint death with a just hand. How you show that you leave your body and the mind is left. You show how the mind is not tangable. And that it is importaint to show that in poetry. People only link the soul to death, but you linked the mind. AWSOME!

I thought that that poem had much hidden meaning. Please don't hate me if I'm seeing to deeply into things, that's just what came out at me. I really liked reading it. It wasn't too short, and it didn't drag out. Well written.
~Ravyn

He knows a passion
An outburst of sin
Languished devotion
With trials worn thin

I really loved these lines. They are so well written. Very well penned with appropriate wordings. Max ratings

Wow, this an amazing poem love. i really don't have any criticism to give to you on this one...i loved every stanza, no 1 part better than the rest. 5/5 deffinately.

Hey this is good. I think I understand it. Is this saying that a person mind has now been taken over by the devil? If not that's what i got from it lol. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Great wording and whole poem has some special tone, I really like it, it adds effective atmosphere on this superb piece.

As much as tht tuk me break, i loved it just as much.. Superb piece .. no doubt..
loved stanza two.. u really have brought it out in this one . Amazing work , mes amis , Amazing.
Keep it up

~Wake~

Really good,like the unique style,5/5

Very good, short and sweet with so many ways to view it, and thank you for the comment